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This is an archive article published on January 21, 2009

Cadence,Credibility: his way with words

Supporters talk about Barack Obamas speeches as if they were rock concerts. Blew me away . . . I realized I was crying . . .

Supporters talk about Barack Obamas speeches as if they were rock concerts. Blew me away . . . I realized I was crying . . . They brag about having been in the hall to hear them the way they might brag about having been at Woodstock when Jimi Hendrix played The Star-Spangled Banner.

As much as anything else,Obama won the presidency with words. He is an orator,a rare thing in a time when educated people have been taught to distrust old-fashioned eloquence. They want text they can deconstruct,they want candidates who talk about the issues. Thats not what they got from Obama. During the presidential race,Sen John McCain warned Americans against being deceived by an eloquent but empty call for change. Sen. Hillary Clinton In the process of losing the nomination to Obama,she warned of talk versus action.

The crowd was quiet now,watching me, Obama has written of discovering the power of his oratory in college. Somebody started to clap. Go on with it,Barack, somebody shouted. Tell it like it is. Then others started in,clapping,cheering,and I knew I had them,that the connection had been made.

Connect. Yes,we can. Connect with repetition,cadences,attitude,rises and falls of tone. Yes,we can.

Its about the tune,not the lyrics,with Obama, says Philip Collins,who wrote speeches for Tony Blair. Collins says the way he slides down some words and hits others the intonation,the emphasis,the pauses and the silences.. Ted Sorensen,who wrote John Kennedys Inaugural Address,said oratory required speaking from the heart,to the heart,directly,not too complicated,relatively brief sentences,words that are clear to everyone.

Obama won souls with pathos and ethos. In a dangerous moment,he used logos to justify his position on the racial remarks made by the Rev. Jeremiah Wright. It worked.

 

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