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UPSC Essentials | Mains answer practice : GS 4 — Ethics, Integrity & Aptitude (Week 10)

UPSC CSE Mains 2023 season has begun. Are you ready for it? Here are questions on religion, nature and a case study on women issues from GS paper 4 for this week with essential points as the fodder for your answers. Try them out!

Mains answer writingThe question is not whether Shanti the city girl is better off today than if she had stayed on in her village. Find more in the case study today. (File)
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Shanti’s story is a perfect fit as a UPSC Ethics case study. Dive deep along with an advance theory question connecting religion, natural order, and resources. Let’s learn.

UPSC Essentials brings to you its new initiative for the practice of Mains answer writing. Mains Answer Writing will cover essential topics of static and dynamic parts of the UPSC Civil Services syllabus covered under various GS papers. This answer-writing practice is designed to help you as a value addition to your UPSC CSE Mains. We will cover one new subject four days in a week. Attempt today’s answer writing on questions related to topics of GS-4 to check your progress.

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QUESTION 1

Religious notions of India provide an understanding of the natural order, and resources to resist its degradation. Discuss.

QUESTION 2

CASE STUDY

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Shanti is an 18 year old hoping to complete her schooling in April next year from a government school in southwest Delhi. She lost her mother, Santosh, the only breadwinner in the family, last year. Santosh was a masseur, known in her gali as a “maalishwali”, a widow who brought up her two sons and daughter on her meagre earnings. Santosh was married into a family that owned some land in Haryana. With the division of the land between brothers, the income was not enough to cover expenses, so her father moved to the city in search of a livelihood. Here, the city was seen as a lifesaver. He got a job as a contract long-distance truck driver and became a heavy drinker. Shanti and her brothers were brought up in an atmosphere of domestic violence, with her mother, Santosh, as the target. There were no networks to help out this family in distress. On the contrary, family ties with the village had weakened without any compensatory support in the city. In the city, they faced challenges of housing, water, and medicines. Shifting to the margins of the city due to housing concerns also meant a higher transport bill, as well as greater vulnerability to sexual harassment.

Santosh’s husband died of alcohol abuse. She died last year of a mysterious illness at 45. It was said that a neighbour in the unrecognised slum colony where they live had performed “tantric rites” against her. Shanti does not want to believe this, having learnt health science in school, but is silenced by her two brothers, both dropouts, both older, who warn her that she will meet the same fate if she displeases “society”. As a single woman, their mother faced social disapproval for travelling to distant places in pursuit of her work, often returning late at night. Shanti, too, has become the target of gossip. In the last year, she has developed a close relationship with a boy a little older than her, which has met with strong disapproval from her brothers. She has been beaten by her eldest brother because she defied him. They punished her by preventing her from going to school for two months. They want to marry her off to a person of their choice. He lives in a village in Haryana. Shanti has rebelled. She has moved out of the half-built structure her mother left for her children, and is now living with her 80-year-old grandmother. “How can I go back to the village,” she asks. “I am a city girl now.”

Shanti’s grandmother is your house help and Shanti’s story comes to your knowledge. You want to meet Shanti and understand her case.

(a) What are the various issues which are highlighted in the case study and why are they problematic?

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(b) Why would you like to help? Suggest a few steps which can be taken to make Shanti’s life better.

(c) Is it right to ask whether Shanti the “city girl” is better off today than she would be if she had stayed on in her village?

(Source: The divided city by Brinda Karat)

THOUGHT PROCESS

You may enrich your answers by some of the following points

QUESTION 1

Religious notions of India provide an understanding of the natural order, and resources to resist its degradation. Discuss.

Introduction

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You may begin your answer by a general statement which may indicate the examiner about the content of your body. For example:

The inherent culture of entrusting sacred identities through the articulation of beliefs, rituals, art and myths form collective memories and ownership to protect the environment.

Or

You may simply connect religion with nature and resources.

Body

For a theoretically abstract question, examples are very important. Support your points with examples you know from religion and society. You may talk about tribal initiatives. For example:

The Hindu Vedic principle of Rta dharma — and similar principles in Sikhism, Sufism and religious thoughts of other indigenous communities in India — provides guidelines to counter the irresponsible decisions made in the name of development by governments and private stakeholders benefiting from environmental clearances. In the book The Work of Nations, author Robert Reich states that the nation that judiciously manages water, soil and other natural resources will be the global success story.

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The Hindu concept of Rta dharma, explained by Kapila Vatsyayan in her essay ‘Ecology and Indian Myth’, states that the moral duty of communities is through karma towards sustaining and maintaining Rta (cosmic natural order). The same thought is reiterated in the Guru Granth Sahib: The book enunciates a concern for the environment as an integrated approach to life and nature by stating that air, water, earth, and life — all originated from the True Lord who resides in each one of us and requires protection. Islamic scholar Sigrid Nökel offers similar ideas through terms such as fitra creation as natural order; tawhid — that all things in the world are related to one another and are, as aspects of God, valuable and worthy of preservation; and, that khilafa refers to the role of mankind as the trustee of creation.

The myth of Krishna punishing the serpent Kaliya, who polluted the river Yamuna, is one example. This traditional wisdom in the semantics of development is marginalised — building roads, setting up industries, creating infrastructure spell short-term gains for the few and apocalypse for humanity as a whole.

Consider the importance given to the elements such as earth, water, air, and fire, in Vedic hymns, and in gaathas or myths. The tribal rising to protect their sacred mountains in Chhattisgarh or Odisha, is a recollection of the metaphor of the mountain that symbolises the mythical centre and the axis of the world as represented in the idea of Meru and Kailash; it is a physical form that harbours water, soil and vegetation. “The disturbance in water, earth, vegetation, river and mountain ecology system has threatened all manner of life. mythically, Seshnaga (the cosmic serpent in the sea) upholds the earth.which is threatened,” writes Vatsyayan.

The community ownership expressed in the protests in Chhattisgarh requires duplication in many more areas. The approaching national water emergency “is not because of lack of rains or water bodies, but mismanagement of resources on the ground,” says water warrior Farhad Contractor. The Rta dharma towards water, for instance, is expressed in rituals to clean waterbodies in Rajasthan and to appease water spirits in Uttarakhand. Air pollution defies the concept of Vayu, the god of pure air, in the Vedic ethos. Cutting of trees, escalating construction without consideration to secure water catchment areas or aquifers, is letting loose the tamsic energies: Tamas, in Samkhya Hindu philosophy, refers to a proclivity to generate sickness, dullness and inertia. These gaathas needs to retold and understood by the community to assert environmental citizenry.

Conclusion

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Such a question gives you a scope to write a thoughtful answer linking it to a subject which isn’t directly mentioned by essentially talking about it. For example, you may conclude by talking about ‘culture’.

Culture is the human response to a geographical context that dictates the way communities dress, eat, design houses, and celebrate. Even the manner in which language — sounds evolve — is inspired by natural environments. Social groups, traditionally, create livelihoods by harnessing available natural resources. Not factoring cultural wisdom to conserve natural environment impacts geographies and, in turn, reconfigures cultural responses.

(Source: In Good Faith – Ecological dharma by Navina Jafa, a cultural activist, an academic and a performing artist.)

QUESTION 2

CASE STUDY

Shanti is an 18 year old hoping to complete her schooling in April next year from a government school in southwest Delhi. She lost her mother, Santosh, the only breadwinner in the family, last year. Santosh was a masseur, known in her gali as a “maalishwali”, a widow who brought up her two sons and daughter on her meagre earnings. Santosh was married into a family that owned some land in Haryana. With the division of the land between brothers, the income was not enough to cover expenses, so her father moved to the city in search of a livelihood. Here, the city was seen as a lifesaver. He got a job as a contract long-distance truck driver and became a heavy drinker. Shanti and her brothers were brought up in an atmosphere of domestic violence, with her mother, Santosh, as the target. There were no networks to help out this family in distress. On the contrary, family ties with the village had weakened without any compensatory support in the city. In the city, they faced challenges of housing, water, and medicines. Shifting to the margins of the city due to housing concerns also meant a higher transport bill, as well as greater vulnerability to sexual harassment.

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Santosh’s husband died of alcohol abuse. She died last year of a mysterious illness at 45. It was said that a neighbour in the unrecognised slum colony where they live had performed “tantric rites” against her. Shanti does not want to believe this, having learnt health science in school, but is silenced by her two brothers, both dropouts, both older, who warn her that she will meet the same fate if she displeases “society”. As a single woman, their mother faced social disapproval for travelling to distant places in pursuit of her work, often returning late at night. Shanti, too, has become the target of gossip. In the last year, she has developed a close relationship with a boy a little older than her, which has met with strong disapproval from her brothers. She has been beaten by her eldest brother because she defied him. They punished her by preventing her from going to school for two months. They want to marry her off to a person of their choice. He lives in a village in Haryana. Shanti has rebelled. She has moved out of the half-built structure her mother left for her children, and is now living with her 80-year-old grandmother. “How can I go back to the village,” she asks. “I am a city girl now.”

Shanti’s grandmother is your domestic help and Shanti’s story comes to your knowledge. You want to meet Shanti and understand her case.

(a) What are the various issues which are highlighted in the case study and why are they problematic?

Issues Why is the issue problematic?
Problems with urbanization
Migration
Women issues- domestic violence, etc.
Lack of education
Problematic societal norms

You may add/subtract issues as per their relevance but stick to major ones indicated in the case study.

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(b) Why would you like to help? Suggest a few steps which can be taken to make Shanti’s life better.

Why do you want to help? Just because she is your domestic help’s granddaughter or a responsible citizen. Here you should justify yourself. A one-liner won’t suffice.

What can you do as immediate solutions and as long term solutions to the problems? Remember you should be pragmatic in your approach. Your solutions should be realistic. Remember the case study doesn’t state your profession or position in society. So your solutions should remain close to the problems indicated in the case study:

1. Education

2. Counselling

3. Accompanying or arranging her visit to the village.

4. Talking to the family etc.

(c) Is it right to ask whether Shanti the “city girl” is better off today than she would be if she had stayed on in her village?

You may approach the above question in the following manner:

The question should not be whether Shanti the city girl is better off today than she would be if she had stayed on in her village. It is whether Shanti, as a “city girl”, is as well off anywhere in the country.

Ponder: Why both cities and village should be ‘safe places’? Although being a place of opportunities, a city can be of no good if the society isn’t progressively reforming.

Class-based inequalities can greet Shanti at every corner. An ideal city would be a city of equal access to at least basic services like housing, education, health, transport, and civic amenities.

The alienation of migrant workers from support bases more accessible in their home villages makes the city a place of loneliness and isolation for families like Shanti’s.

Address the issues which exists in the society despite being in a village or a city.

NOTE: You can have different methods, ways, and styles to answer a case study. Even the points may differ. However, they should be ETHICAL! 

(Source: The divided city by Brinda Karat)

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Manas Srivastava leads the UPSC Essentials section of The Indian Express (digital). He majorly writes on UPSC, other competitive exams and education-related projects. In the past, Manas has represented India at the G-20 Youth Summit in Mexico. He is a former member of the Youth Council, GOI. A two-time topper/gold medallist in History (both in graduation and post-graduation) from Delhi University, he has mentored and taught UPSC aspirants for more than five years. His diverse role in The Indian Express consists of writing, editing, anchoring/ hosting, interviewing experts, and curating and simplifying news for the benefit of students. He hosts the YouTube talk show called ‘Art and Culture with Devdutt Pattanaik’ and a LIVE series on Instagram and YouTube called ‘LIVE with Manas’.His talks on ‘How to read a newspaper’ focus on newspaper reading as an essential habit for students. His articles and videos aim at finding solutions to the general queries of students and hence he believes in being students' editor, preparing them not just for any exam but helping them to become informed citizens. This is where he makes his teaching profession meet journalism. He is also the editor of UPSC Essentials' monthly magazine for the aspirants. He is a recipient of the Dip Chand Memorial Award, the Lala Ram Mohan Prize and Prof. Papiya Ghosh Memorial Prize for academic excellence. He was also awarded the University’s Post-Graduate Scholarship for pursuing M.A. in History where he chose to specialise in Ancient India due to his keen interest in Archaeology. He has also successfully completed a Certificate course on Women’s Studies by the Women’s Studies Development Centre, DU. As a part of N.S.S in the past, Manas has worked with national and international organisations and has shown keen interest and active participation in Social Service. He has led and been a part of projects involving areas such as gender sensitisation, persons with disability, helping slum dwellers, environment, adopting our heritage programme. He has also presented a case study on ‘Psychological stress among students’ at ICSQCC- Sri Lanka. As a compere for seminars and other events he likes to keep his orating hobby alive. His interests also lie in International Relations, Governance, Social issues, Essays and poetry. ... Read More

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