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UPSC Essays Simplified: Understanding and Deconstructing the Essay topics – the first step

How to write a good essay in UPSC CSE? Our expert, takes you through various stages of writing an essay in UPSC Essentials' new series. Don't miss the Essay Exercise towards the end of the article.

upsc essays simplified by irs ravi kapoor for upsc essentials stage 1 deconstructing and understanding essaysRavi Kapoor, our expert, in this new series who guides the aspirants with a simplified framework on how to write a good essay. Don't miss 'The Essay Exercise' towards the end of the article. (Image: Freepik)

How to write essays for UPSC Civil Services Exams? This is one of the most popular questions among aspirants. In UPSC Essentials’ special series ‘UPSC Essays Simplified‘, we take you through various steps of writing a good essay. While there is no set formula or fixed criteria prescribed, Manas Srivastava talks to Ravi Kapoor, our expert, in this new series who guides the aspirants with a simplified framework on how to write a good essay.

Don’t miss ‘The Essay Exercise’ towards the end of the article. Ravi Kapoor focuses on the following steps of pre-writing and writing stages which will help aspirants to write a ‘good essay’.

PRE-WRITING STAGE (Steps 1-3) Step 1: Understanding and Deconstructing the topic (Today’s article)
Step 2: Ideation
Step 3: Structure and Flow
WRITING STAGE (Steps 4-8) Step 4: How to write an introduction 
Step 5: What goes in the body?
Step 6: How to conclude
Step 7: Essay Extras
Step 8: Types of content

Today, we will focus on Step 1. 

About our Expert: Ravi Kapoor, an IRS officer, has now ditched his coveted rank of deputy commissioner and has offered free quality mentorship to UPSC aspirants, drawing upon his ten years of experience to create customised and productive curriculum. Through a free mentorship programme, he integrates tailored educational materials, psychological principles, visual learning techniques, and a strong emphasis on mental well-being into his teaching skills granting aspirants a chance to learn from his expertise.

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How to understand and deconstruct the UPSC essay topics?

Ravi Kapoor: UPSC Essay topics can be deceptively hard at times. Some topics are deeply reflective and philosophical like the recently asked topic “Mathematics is the music of reasons.” Others can have social and ethical connotations such as “A society that has more justice is a society that needs less charity.” Regardless of the type of essay topic the UPSC asks, aspirants must know that the first step before beginning writing is to understand the essay’s core thoroughly. We call this step ‘Understanding and Deconstructing the Essay topic’. What follows is a series of checklists and advice to aid — the 5 elements of the first step. Let’s understand with examples.

5 elements to understand and deconstruct the essay topic:

1. Check your prior knowledge- Context

Even though UPSC essay topics seem generic, some of them require substantial understanding and prior knowledge of the topic to do justice. It is critical to be deeply honest with yourself about your prior knowledge of the topic before delving into it.

For instance, “History is a series of victories won by the scientific man over the romantic man” might seem like a generic debate about rational thinking and idealism but the essay will not be of any value unless you can illustrate your arguments via concrete historical examples traversing the dark ages, the Copernican revolution, Renaissance, the industrial age etc.

It might be a wise decision to altogether skip writing on essay topics about which you have limited or half-baked knowledge, even if it seems appealing.

2. Isolate the core themes- Deconstruction

Deconstruction Method is a powerful analytical tool where a statement is broken up into its basic building blocks for analysis. It means that you must look at the individual parts of the UPSC essay topic separately first, and later see how they combine to form the essay topic statement. It is a bottom-up approach where you start with the small and build up to the big Essay topic.

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For instance, “Forests are the best-case studies for economic excellence” speaks of 2 core themes or concepts- ‘Forests’ and ‘Economic Excellence’.

Another example- “Visionary decision-making happens at the intersection of intuition and logic.” It consists of 3 main themes or concepts- “Visionary decision-making”, “Intuition” and “Logic”.

It is critical to mention that the statement in the essay topic may have to be temporarily ignored to isolate the core themes. Once isolated, the core themes can be considered in more detail. This makes for superior ideation and brainstorming when the essay topic is read as a whole. It also helps to ensure that the content in the body of the essay is comprehensive.

3. Consider the counterarguments – Balance

A mistake aspirants often make is to simply agree with the essay topic and elaborate on the contents without realizing that an essay topic does not always have to be agreed upon. Regardless of how definitively correct an essay topic may appear, it always has counterarguments that deserve to be highlighted.

Like two sides of a coin, an essay topic has two sides that need to be appreciated in depth.

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For example- “The time to repair the roof is when the sun is shining.” It seems straightforward and correct. The statement highlights the need for preparedness and serves as a call to be vigilant when times are good.

Counter-argument- While preparedness for the future has solid strategic merit, life is short and when times are good, it is perhaps also the ideal time to appreciate the present moment, count one’s blessings, be grateful and “stop and smell the roses”, so to speak.

An essay that elaborates blindly without appreciating the other side of the topic will not be good enough and will reflect your restricted vision and wisdom. Considering the counter-arguments will bring balance and lend a more mature perspective to your writing.

4. Penetrate the depth

Think after looking at the essay topic: Is the statement superficial, or metaphorical or does it lead to a much deeper issue at hand?

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It might be tempting to look at an ambiguous and open-ended statement like “You cannot step twice in the same river” and try and interpret it with your own understanding. While it is possible to superimpose your understanding based on common sense on such topics, it might not be the best way forward because the depth of some topics can be elusive.

“You cannot step twice in the same river” is a deeply philosophical quote by Heraclitus that underscores the ever-changing nature of the universe. It is a metaphysical statement that uses the metaphor of the river to illustrate that constancy is an illusion as the river always moves and is never really the same, except in our minds. It also speaks to the ever-changing nature of beings such as humans whose experiences, personalities and even bodies are slowly changing with each passing moment. In fact, the complete quote by Heraclitus is “No man ever steps in the same river twice, for it’s not the same river and he’s not the same man.”

The idea of impermanence is central to religions such as Buddhism (Annica), philosophy, psychology, and even science (Entropy, thermodynamics). To write effectively on this topic you would need to penetrate its depth which is no small feat to do on the spot in the examination hall. Therefore, while thinking about essay topics, be cautious and proceed only when you are certain about the topic’s intellectual depth.

5. Map the width

Think after looking at the essay topic: What are all the dimensions that are important for the essay topic?

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Often, you may get the feeling of familiarity with an essay topic because it is abstract and generic like “Smile is the chosen vehicle for all ambiguities”. That means you know something about it but not most of all there is to know about it.

In the above essay topic, for instance, one can easily make out that the essay topic is about smiling as a deceptive signal that can be used to convey or disguise genuine emotions. While this topic revolves predominantly around social psychology, that’s not all there is to it. To be comprehensive would be to highlight various dimensions along with examples associated with it such as:

· A smile can be used to convey or disguise- confusion, malice, jealousy, joy, surprise, love, hate, disgust etc.

· Other themes and ideas worth touching upon include- Non-verbal communication, empathy, compassion, relationships, emotional intelligence, mental health, social media, depression etc.

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· Used by marketing agencies, politicians etc. to appear more likeable.

· Ethical dimension of how deception is normalized in our society.

This underscores the need for being comprehensive from the point of view of content while writing the essay.

The Essay Exercise

The 5 elements above are essential considerations before choosing and writing the essay. Here is an exercise to put this into practice:

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5 Elements to Understand and Deconstruct the UPSC Essay topic Example Explained:

“Mathematics is the music of reasons”

For Your Practice:

“There is nothing permanent except change”

Check your prior knowledge- Context The topic speaks of the aesthetic beauty of mathematics and how a purely objective and logical discipline has “beauty” and an art-like quality
Isolate core themes-Deconstruction “Mathematics” “Reasons” “music”
Consider the counterarguments – Balance
  • While some people appreciate the aesthetic beauty of mathematics, most don’t.
  • AI, computation, accountancy- many fundamental applications of mathematics, are not seen as art forms.
  • While music has mathematical undertones , its appreciation is purely subjective unlike math itself which is rigorous and objective
Penetrate the depth

(List the disciplines or core themes that may be central to the statement)

                Math, Philosophy, Arts
Map the width

(List content ideas that are closely associated with the essay topic)

Distinction between applied and pure mathematics, logic, Pythagoras, computation, AI, music, art etc

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Manas Srivastava leads the UPSC Essentials section of The Indian Express (digital). He majorly writes on UPSC, other competitive exams and education-related projects. In the past, Manas has represented India at the G-20 Youth Summit in Mexico. He is a former member of the Youth Council, GOI. A two-time topper/gold medallist in History (both in graduation and post-graduation) from Delhi University, he has mentored and taught UPSC aspirants for more than five years. His diverse role in The Indian Express consists of writing, editing, anchoring/ hosting, interviewing experts, and curating and simplifying news for the benefit of students. He hosts the YouTube talk show called ‘Art and Culture with Devdutt Pattanaik’ and a LIVE series on Instagram and YouTube called ‘LIVE with Manas’.His talks on ‘How to read a newspaper’ focus on newspaper reading as an essential habit for students. His articles and videos aim at finding solutions to the general queries of students and hence he believes in being students' editor, preparing them not just for any exam but helping them to become informed citizens. This is where he makes his teaching profession meet journalism. He is also the editor of UPSC Essentials' monthly magazine for the aspirants. He is a recipient of the Dip Chand Memorial Award, the Lala Ram Mohan Prize and Prof. Papiya Ghosh Memorial Prize for academic excellence. He was also awarded the University’s Post-Graduate Scholarship for pursuing M.A. in History where he chose to specialise in Ancient India due to his keen interest in Archaeology. He has also successfully completed a Certificate course on Women’s Studies by the Women’s Studies Development Centre, DU. As a part of N.S.S in the past, Manas has worked with national and international organisations and has shown keen interest and active participation in Social Service. He has led and been a part of projects involving areas such as gender sensitisation, persons with disability, helping slum dwellers, environment, adopting our heritage programme. He has also presented a case study on ‘Psychological stress among students’ at ICSQCC- Sri Lanka. As a compere for seminars and other events he likes to keep his orating hobby alive. His interests also lie in International Relations, Governance, Social issues, Essays and poetry. ... Read More

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